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Steele's Commentary
    In my original script the ring was driven into Mathos' skull and widened by Veona's hands.  It was more painfull, but maybe harder to show.  Either way panels 1,2,3, and 5 still get across the idea that this method causes large amounts of physical pain, which was the most important message of the page.
Parasite's Commentary
      I really enjoyed working on Mathos' freak out!!